it's wonderful! it seems to me like she has a dream and she's so close to achieving it....just my interpretation i know virtually nothing about photomanips so i can't offer any critique...BUT I LOVE IT!!
You have such a good sense for bringing the elements together. The black star she's holding (or levitating..?) is a tiny bit jarring - too dark, contrasting in a false rather than interesting way - but otherwise it really caught my attention for the right reasons! Keep doing these, you're good at it.
i agree the star is too dark and looks a little out-of place but if i was to change this i would need to start from scratch again since i don't know how to keep layers separate when saving in photoshop! thanks very much for the kind words